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CELPIP Writing Sample Test Task 2: Responding to Survey Questions

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You are working in a company offering IT services. Your company is conducting a survey to know ways to improve the working environment. There are two options

Job satisfaction survey :

Option A:Give a salary hike to all the employees on the basis of experience.
Option B: Give a salary hike to all the employees on the basis of educational qualification.

ABC is a great company to work in. However in the past year, moral in the company has been at an all-time low and I appreciate that the company has noticed and decided to improve the working environment. Out of the options given, I strongly believe the best way to address the underlying issues and improving the working environment holistically, would be to give a salary hike to all employees on the basis of experience in the company. Here are a few reasons, why I have suggested this option. As stated earlier, many employees like myself, enjoy what we do and contributing to the organisation's success. Hence the reason, the company has been able to retain many of the skilled personnel for years. Unfortunately, the compensation package offered by Elekta when benchmarked has been discovered to be one of the IT services company in London that pays the lowest salary to a Senior Business Analyst with 5 years experience. In addition to that, Elekta offers only a 2% increase in annual salaries. This is considerably low. In order to improve morale and retain skilled personnel, I suggest employees salaries are reviewed based on experience and hiked to the level achievable in this industry.