CELPIP Writing Sample Test Task 2: Responding to Survey Questions

Read the following information.

A local newspaper is conducting a survey to know whether their paper should have more news or more discounts and offers

Local News Paper Survey:

Option A: Your newspaper should have more Local and International news, then discount coupons, etc.
Option B: You think you can access news online but you need more of Discount coupons and offers section.

I would like to opine in favor of option A which is the newspaper should have more local and international news and discount coupons as it seems to be a much better choice for me than the second available option. There are several possible reasons for my choice which I am going to bring forward. To begin with, there are two primary reasons why option A is more advantageous than option B. Firstly, it will increase exposure; people will get familiar with everything around the world. For example, adding more international and local news will help people to be updated but not limited to what is around them. Secondly, it increases the learning process. One research article suggests that reading local and international has been increasingly been effective in contributing to the learning process for people around the world. Considering these reasons, I believe that having more local and international news would be more worthy than the assessment of news online.