Writing Task 1: Writing an Email

Read the following information.

Recently you visited the Zoological park and had an uncanny experience, as a man died by falling in the tiger’s enclosure. You were not able to do anything at that point but wanted to show your concern for the safety of the visitors.

Write an email to the Director of the Zoological Park in about 150-200 words. Your email should do the following things:

  • Give a description of the incident
  • Complain about the short fencing
  • Show your concern for the safety of the visitors

Dear Zoo Director, I am writing to inform you about an incident that happened last weekend. While my family and I were hanging out in the zoo, unfortunately, a tiger has attacked one of the zoo visitors. It looks that the tiger was hungry and out of food. Thus, the man was a prey for the tiger as it pulled him from outside to inside the gauge. The fence was very short, and I do not believe that it is as per the standard. The zoo management should install the enclosures as per specification to maintain a safe environment. It is not acceptable at all to have an incident because of not fulfilling the design requirements. This is an extremely disappointing experience. Everyone is now worried about the low quality and services of the zoo. This is the only zoo in the city for the public, and it is shameful to have such an incident. The zoo is essential for our children and the next generation to know about the wildlife world. It is your responsibility to make the zoo safe for workers and the visitor as well. Thank you for your time and consideration. Regards, Thomas