Writing Task 2: Responding to Survey Questions

Read the following information.

You are working in a company offering IT services. Your company is conducting survey to know ways to improve working environment. There are two options :

Job satisfaction survey :

Option A:Give a salary hike to all the employees on the basis of experience.
Option B: Give a salary hike to all the employees on the basis of educational qualification.

To whom it may concern I want to choose salary raise based on the educational qualification of people as those employees are up-to-date and have spent huge money on their degrees. Moreover, experienced people may not have the same skills due to a lack of education and will be motivated to study further with this step. Firstly, people who achieve higher degrees learn concepts that are in trend. This helps them to achieve their deadlines at the office more quickly and easily. Secondly, a lot of money is invested in studies, which are assumed to be paid off by good salaries. Furthermore, the experienced class may not have good skills due to the lack of qualifications. That is to say, and they may follow the old techniques to solve new problems at work. Therefore, although many people would not like to study further, this salary raise may encourage them to move forward in their academic careers. I hope I can justify my point of hiking salaries for workers who are more educated as they are being updated from their studies and have to return the loans they have taken for their studies. Regards Tony

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