Writing Task 2: Responding to Survey Questions

Read the following information.

Your university is conducting survey to know how many work hours should be permitted to students in a week time. The University has sent out an opinion survey to see what students think about it.

Weekly working hours for Students :

Option A: Less than 15 hours per week in a single job.
Option B: More than 20 hours per week with all multiple jobs hours added.

To whom it may concern I am with the second option of fewer than 15 hours per week in a single job to help the students financially and increase academic output. Moreover, working more than 20 hours, including all jobs, will make them money-minded and negatively affect their health. Working for fewer hours at a single station will help students financially. That is to say, they can join another workplace after their shift if they want and will earn twice the money to pay for their rent and tuition. Furthermore, they can also give time to their studies as they will be working few hours at each work, which will raise their grades. On the other hand, employment at multiple places will encourage them to earn more money as there are no rules set for the upper limit of hours for a job. It will also affect their physical and mental well-being as they will not get any time to relax or study. I hope I made my opinion clear about working less than 15 hours as it will not only make the person secure about money but will also help them in studies. Regards Tony