Writing Task 1: Writing an Email

Read the following information.

Recently you visited the Zoological park and had an uncanny experience, as a man died by falling in the tiger’s enclosure. You were not able to do anything at that point but wanted to show your concern for the safety of the visitors.

Write an email to the Director of the Zoological Park in about 150-200 words. Your email should do the following things:

  • Give a description of the incident
  • Complain about the short fencing
  • Show your concern for the safety of the visitors

Dear Zoo Director, I am writing this letter regarding my traumatic experience during one of my visits to your zoological park. We were all horrified when a tiger attacked a man during our field trip, and unfortunately, the man died. I noticed that your temporary fencing could lead to more incidents like this because of not implementing preventive measures. I also noticed that even your employees don't have an announcement or guidelines during our visit. I want to suggest that we should always keep in mind the safety of our visitors to have a pleasant and peaceful experience throughout the visit. Moreover, we should implement that every visitor should have a specific distance encounter from every animal to avoid casualties. Additionally, they should also put a higher fence to be safe with wild animals like a tiger. I hope you accept my advice for the sake and safety of all visitors to the park. Regards, Mike