Writing Task 2: Responding to Survey Questions

Read the following information.

A local NGO working for the betterment of school-going kids, especially focusing on reducing the stress level in the new generation has sent out an opinion survey to see what people think about the presence of multimedia gadgets in house.

NGO conducting a survey:

Option A: Kids should have no access to gadgets like smartphones or iPad etc..
Option B: Kids should be encouraged to read books in their free time.

To Whom it may concern. I think that encourage children to band children's access to electronic toys such as a phone in their pastime would be a better choice. Even though reading books has some advantages, sometimes living without toys would benefit kids. The first and foremost reason is kids overwhelmed by using gadgets for entertainment, such as playing games and watching animations. Therefore, these types of gadgets increase the stress impact on the children. The second reason is that because of most families' mechanical lifestyle, children have less body activity, and most of them are overweight. Moreover, they need some time to be away from toys and do other sports, dancing, and singing. Considering these reasons, I believe that restrict the access of children to the toys would be a superior choice. Both children and parents would be overjoyed. Spending pastime without gadgets and they can know each other much better. Thanks for giving me a chance to provide input on this issue. Regards Thomas

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