Writing Task 2: Responding to Survey Questions

Read the following information.

You are working in a company offering financial services. Your company is conducting a survey to improve the ways to recruit new employees. The company has sent an opinion survey to see what existing employees think about changes in recruitment policy. There are two options :

Recruitment policy survey :

Option A:Hire recruitement agency.
Option B: Hire people only through a reference from existing employees.

I vote to hire a recruitment agency which is specialized in recruiting finance candidates. A recruitment agency will have the expertise and experience to select skilled employees for our company. It will already have an established strategy to advertise, so our job advertisements can reach many areas around the city. There are many recruitment agencies in our city providing attractive discount offers which can benefit our company and at the same time fulfill our requirements. Some of the agencies are even conducting tests and assessing the candidates by providing them real-time projects before providing them with job opportunities. So, I believe we can make use of the agencies and recruit skilled professionals who can be productive from day one in our company. We are in huge demand for candidates at all levels. Hiring people through references can only help, to some extent, but I think it would not be a better option to meet our resource demands. Thanks for giving me an opportunity to participate in this survey.

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