Writing Task 2: Responding to Survey Questions

Read the following information.

A local newspaper is conducting a survey to know whether their paper should have more news or more discounts and offers

Local News Paper Survey:

Option A: Your newspaper should have more Local and International news, then discount coupons, etc.
Option B: You think you can access news online but you need more Discount coupons and offers section.

To whom it may concern. Newspaper is an integral part of everyone's life, and it is the first thing that most people go through in the morning. While I see the benefits and excitement of discount coupons, I think everyday world affairs in the newspaper would be a better option for the following reasons. First, All older people are not tech-savvy to go through the news online and follow an old newspaper tradition. It would be more convenient for them to have access to news than the discounts that won't be of much use. Second, Coupons is something that our Youth is more attracted to, which they can get from the website. Still, with proper headlines of current articles, People won't have to browse the sections on smartphones and bring them the idea of the news, improving their reading and vocabulary skills. In conclusion, if the above choices are considered, it will be beneficial for most people. Regards, Mike.

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