Writing Task 2: Responding to Survey Questions

Read the following information.

Your community is planning to sponsor the annual parade. All community members were asked for their personal opinion whether or not the community should spend money on parade.

Survey for sponsoring annual parade:

Option A:You think it's a good idea.
Option B: You think its a waste of money.

To whom it may concern I believe sponsoring the annual parade would be an excellent idea for society. I am enlightening some points in this survey that would support my choice. Firstly, It would be a proud moment to sponsor the parade because the annual parade represents our culture and traditions. In addition, the younger generation can make them aware of our culture and traditions. Secondly, our frontline warriors are also taking part in the parade.so, it is our honour to support them by sponsoring the march. Besides that, the march would be interesting because our country has a lot of immigrants, and they show their culture and tradition through their dressing, food or music. Hence, the annual march would be a cheerful festival for all of the residents. Lastly, saving the money for the emergency would be a better idea, but from my perspective, spending the money for the annual parade would be a more appealing choice. I appreciate the community manager for this survey. Regards Tony

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