Writing Task 2: Responding to Survey Questions

Read the following information.

You live in a city where the number of casualties related to drunk driving has risen in recent years. The city is planning to impose heavy penalties and has sent out an opinion survey to see what residents would like to say on this issue.

Drink & Drive Penalty Survey:

Option A: Heavy panalities should be imposed.
Option B: License should be suspended for longer period.

To whom it may concern. I agree that the number of accidents is increased in recent years, and forcing heavy penalties on drunk drivers would be a controllable step to solve this issue. Firstly, imposing a high fine on the drivers who had drunk will give a clear message to the resident about how the traffic department is strict towards the road casualties. Additionally, the party animals will avoid driving after-party because of this heavy forfeit. Another reason I support the heavy penalties because the traffic department creates some revenue from the drunken drivers. So, the government will use this money to equip our cops with the latest arms and safety equipment because they lack road rampaging. As per my perception, the residents will feel safe if the drunk and driving incidents will be reduced, and applying a high sanction on drunk drivers will be the first step towards reducing such accidents. Thanks for the excellent survey. Regards, Mike

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