Writing Task 2: Responding to Survey Questions

Read the following information.

Your city traffic department is conducting a survey to bring in revolutionary changes in the traffic management. The department has sent out an opinion survey to see what residents feel about the given options

Traffic Management Survey :

Option A: Department should issue more tickets with heavy plenties.
Option B: Department should Organise traffic awareness programmes on a regular basis.

To whom it may concern I think the traffic awareness programmes would be a better choice. Even though the city traffic department can think of penalizing the rash drivers with heavy penalties, awareness programmes would eventually add more practical benefits to the people and city. The first reason is that plethora of people in the city are not aware of traffic rules. This is because the authority is issuing the licenses to novice drivers without taking proper driving tests. If the licences are issued only after completion of successful driving & oral test exam, there will be fewer chances of traffic problems. The second reason is that most of the population in the city is of young students of low-income families who do part-time jobs and manage the house properly. This is an intolerable situation that they have been issued the licenses but don't have enough knowledge of traffic rules. Let me briefly recapitulate the conclusion that the awareness programmes will help the people be aware of traffic rules and become the ultimate support for traffic management in the city. Regards Tony

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