Writing Task 2: Responding to Survey Questions

Read the following information.

You are living in a developing country from where people are moving to developed countries. Local government department is conducting a survey to understand the problem.

Brain drain Survey: The department has sent out an opinion survey to see what residents feel about the given options

Option A: Rich countries are stealing professionals from poor countries.
Option B: This is only part of the natural movement of professionals around the world.

To Whom it may concern. The recent relaxations in the immigration policies of developed countries attract professionals from under-developed and developing countries. I appreciate the government's initiative to understand the movement of the people to developed counties. I firmly believe that brain-drain is a natural process by which both professional and the country are benefited. Firstly, the difference in the figures of pay grade for similar jobs in developed, developing and under-developed countries is exponential. The better opportunities and higher living standards and are the driving factors for the relocation of professionals. Additionally, other benefits like medical aid, unemployment, old age pension, etc., attract the deserving people to immigrate to developed countries. Secondly, our nation is benefited from the immigration of our people. The financial support of non-residents is an essential factor in boosting our GDP. A considerable amount of international money is transferred back to our country, which will help minimize the gap and help us move closer to be a developed country. Considering the above reasons, I suppose the movement of professionals worldwide in search of better opportunities and living standards in natural. Regards Tony.