Writing Task 1: Writing an Email

Read the following information.

Recently you visited the Zoological park and had an uncanny experience, as a man died by falling in the tiger’s enclosure. You were not able to do anything at that point but wanted to show your concern for the safety of the visitors.

Write an email to the Director of the Zoological Park in about 150-200 words. Your email should do the following things:

  • Give a description of the incident
  • Complain about the short fencing
  • Show your concern for the safety of the visitors

Dear Zoo Director committee, Greetings, I am writing this mail to inform you about the recent incident and the drawbacks in your Zoo. A few days back, I visited the Zoological Park of yours situated in Sarnia with my family and friends, when everything was going pleasant an incident happen a man fell and died from your fence. As he was with his friends near the tiger's cage, to showcase the tiger's activities in his shelter, and suddenly he slipped fell down and through the branch in the cage and slowly lost his breathe. After observing, the reason that came out for his disbalance was because of the small fence surrounded by the cage. This irresponsible thing in the esteemed Zoo where a maximum of 50000 visitors visits every day is unacceptable. Being a good citizen of the community, I would like to request to rectify your short boundaries. Otherwise, it will lead to reducing the popularity of your well-grown park. I expect my mail will lead you to some consideration and hope to hear from you. Sincerely, Tony