Writing Task 2: Responding to Survey Questions

Read the following information.

Your university is conducting survey to know how many work hours should be permitted to students in a week time. The University has sent out an opinion survey to see what students think about it.

Weekly working hours for Students :

Option A: Less than 15 hours per week in a single job.
Option B: More than 20 hours per week with all multiple jobs hours added.

To whom it may concern. I second with option B because working above 20 hours is a good idea. Students gain good work experience if they work for different organizations, and they also earn good money, which can help them pay tuition fees and bear all other expenses. Firstly, In the digital era, students need more work experience, which will help them choose the right pathway. In addition to that, they will be getting to know which stream gives them job satisfaction. Secondly, It may be hard to work while studying. For instance countries like India, parents cannot bear all the expenses. They will get to know how to treat elders with respect at the workplace and follow specific rules and regulations. Nowadays, practical knowledge is essential than a theoretical one. For instance, students in India do not work while studying. They do have only theoretical knowledge. Considering these reasons, I believe option B would be a better chance. Again this is my opinion but, I will accept whatever decision is made. Thank you for giving me a chance to provide all the inputs on this issue. Regards, Mike

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