Writing Task 2: Responding to Survey Questions

Read the following information.

An independent agency is conducting survey on immigration policy of the country. The Agency has sent out an opinion survey to see what residents would like the government to plan good immigration policy.

Immigration Policy Survey:

Option A:Government should encourage investors.
Option B: Professionals with technical skills should be given preference

To whom it may concern, Based on those two choices, I would prefer option B as we need new immigrants. Canada needs new talent, most especially in the health care, essential and agricultural sector. Every year people around the world are choosing to apply for a Student Visa here in Canada. Those people want to live and work here after they graduated. Research shows that 87% of graduates last year were from the health care sector, like personal support worker. 10% is from agriculture, and 9% is from the essential field. Nowadays, Canada's Immigration Policy is simple. However, we need to bring out some new pathways, especially for the International graduates who study here and work full time. I think it's time to give them back something for their future and the future of their family. This is my personal opinion, but I will support whatever decision is made. Thank you for giving me a chance to provide input on this matter. Regards Thomas

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