Writing Task 2: Responding to Survey Questions

Read the following information.

Hostel management has decided to upgrade the security in and around the campus. The management has sent out an opinion survey to see what residents would like to have as new security measure.

You are residing in a College hostel :

Option A: New HD Night Vision Cameras covering the area around the hostel.
Option B: Installing biometric locks on the doors.

To whom may it concern, Thanks for including me in your survey regarding the new security measures implemented in the hostel. I prefer that we upgrade the current security system with new HD Night Vision Cameras. The camera system will be able to track all people who enter and leave the college hostel. Recently, we have seen an increase in crime, especially theft in and around the hostel. The new camera system will allow us to identify individuals who are not authorized or permitted to enter the college hostel. It will also help deter criminals if they know that the camera system is watching them. Furthermore, the camera system will be an added security measure, especially for girls who live alone in the hostel. Many of the girls are afraid to venture out alone at night, but knowing that there is a camera system will ease their apprehensions. The camera system will effectively monitor all areas in and around the college hostel, whereas the biometric locks on doors will only monitor the area where residents live. For this reason, I believe that the camera system will be a better option for the college hostel; it will provide 24 hours security to all areas utilized by the residents. Thank you! Regards, Felix

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