CELPIP Writing Sample Test Task 2: Responding to Survey Questions

Read the following information.

Your university is conducting a survey to know how many work hours should be permitted to students in a week's time. The University has sent out an opinion survey to see what students think about it.

Weekly working hours for Students :

Option A: Less than 15 hours per week in a single job.
Option B: More than 20 hours per week with all multiple jobs hours added.

I like to opine in favor of option A, as it seems to be better and convincing choice than the other one. Though the other choice is equally appealing, I would strongly recommend the University officials not to allow the students more than 15 hours per week in a single job. To begin with, lesser the hours per week will provide ample time for the students to concentrate on their studies. This would certainly enhance their carrier aspirations as well as their dedicated time towards a specific job. Moreover, if they continue to work on a certain job then they can learn the niche skills of that job and become the master of that job. This would improve their confidence in that job once they complete their degrees. They could also associate themselves with the same job and can come to prove their mettle. Having discussed all the arguments, I believe that the university administration should allow the students with 15 hours per week in a particular job. I appreciate the chance provided to me to voice my opinion.