CELPIP Writing Sample Test Task 2: Responding to Survey Questions

Read the following information.

Your city is planning to develop a new sports complex. The city has sent out an opinion survey to see what residents would like to have built in that area

Sports Complex development survey:

Option A: Athletic tracks and supports Complex: Sports complex will mainly provide facilities to Athletes.
Option B: Baseball ground: Authorities will develop ground with a good sitting capacity

To whom it may concern, In my opinion, developing a baseball ground is a better choice. Even though providing facilities and support for athletes is the initial requirement, providing a baseball team will provide practical benefits in the long run. The first benefit of developing a baseball ground with a good sitting capacity is equal to provide a money resource selling the tickets for important plays. As you know baseball is very popular in this city and everyone would like to watch the games. If the ground has a good quality and decent sitting capacity could be a host for other plays which resulted in more incomes. The second reason is that by focusing on this option and raising the money from all the related activities that come from this facility. More facilities and supports could be developed for athletes in the future. So it is possible to have both options over time. Based on these reasons I think baseball ground is a better choice. Again this is my personal opinion and I will support whatever decision is made. Thank you very much for letting me providing input on this matter.