CELPIP Writing Sample Test Task 2: Responding to Survey Questions

Read the following information.

A local news paper is conducting a survey to know whether their paper should have more news or more discounts and offers

Local News Paper Survey :

Option A: Your newspaper should have more Local and International news, then discount coupons, etc.
Option B: You think you can access news online but you need more of Discount coupons and offers section.

I like to opine in favor of option A, as this seems to be a better and convincing choice than the other one. Though the other choice is equally appealing, I would strongly recommend the newspaper team to consider this option as they have more benefits. To begin with, this option will leverage us to getting more local and international news which is comparatively lesser than the other competitors as of now. More the content you showcase in your daily would improve your subscribers base. Moreover, the discounts and offers will attract your company by the way of new customers. It will also yield your organization more business avenues through advertisements. The revenue attained through these ads would improve the overall quality of the newspaper. Having discussed all the arguments, I believe that your organisation will concentrate on bringing in more local and international news with utmost quality and improve your service which is on par with international standards. I appreciate the chance to provide to me to voice my opinion.