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CELPIP Writing Sample Test Task 2: Responding to Survey Questions

Read the following information.

You are working in a company offering IT services. Your company is conducting a survey to know ways to improve the working environment. There are two options :

Job satisfaction survey :

Option A:Give a salary hike to all the employees on the basis of experience.
Option B: Give a salary hike to all the employees on the basis of educational qualification.

Dear company manager, I am writing this letter in response to the survey and to express my opinion about the preferred ways of improving the working environment in our company. In my opinion, giving a salary hike to all the employees on the basis of educational qualification is a better choice. Even though salary hike based on the experience would be a great way of appreciation of the expertise employee, the other option would provide more practical benefits. My first reason for this choice is that by increasing the salary of the higher educated employees all the employees will be motivated to achieve a higher degree to increase their salary and this might be a great help for the overall development of the company. The second reason for my choice is that there would be no possibility of providing a competitive atmosphere in the company. competition is a crucial factor to enhance the motivation for employees of a company who need a refreshing environment. In the end, I should mention that this is a personal opinion and I will support whatever decision is made. Thank you for giving me the opportunity to provide input on this matter.